manlymanly: (That Hymn has one hell of a beat!)
Aoto ([personal profile] manlymanly) wrote2011-08-16 04:51 pm

Dive 03 [Action / Video]

*Do you happen to be in Violet City today? If so, you may find yourself with Aoto sneaking up behind you as you walk around. What does he do once he gets behind you, you ask? Flip your skirt? Tickle you? Jump you? No no, it is something far far more childish.

He's sticking the mouth of his Remoraid up against your back while holding the water-type like a gun.*

Freeze! Keep your hands where I can see 'em.

[Video, an hour or two later]

Hey, does anybody know a good place in Violet to buy materials? A place for stuff like clothes and plush animals and... well, a good place to buy food too, I guess. Now that I have a good amount of cash I have a few projects I need to get started on!

[identity profile] manlymanly.livejournal.com 2011-08-25 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, uh... Then consider that my critique!

[identity profile] nyamonyamo.livejournal.com 2011-08-26 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
[Frowning.... but she'll finish up the story.]

"Ever since you started helping me grow watermelons,
I have realized that I do deserve to live.

You have convinced me of this.
Because you always encouraged me,
I was able to grow this many watermelons.

And, I found hope in this world. Thank you very much.
I'm not lonely anymore. I'm very happy.

My Hero, you saved me.
Even if I never see you again,
my heart will always be with you."

[identity profile] manlymanly.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
. . .

*w-wow. That's... crazy depressing. He is having a hard time thinking of what to say here*

Saki, is that... Is that really the end?

[identity profile] nyamonyamo.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 08:36 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, it is. Saki put all her thoughts and feelings into this story; what did Aoto think?

[identity profile] manlymanly.livejournal.com 2011-08-30 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
*He looks SUPER SERIOUS for a moment, looking at the drawings, then to Saki, and without connecting nearly enough dots to get an actual picture:*

... wasn't that way too bittersweet to be the ending to a kid's story? Like... Why wouldn't the Hero go after her?! If it were me, I'd definitely chase her down! There's no way I would let her just run off like that.